Comments on: I need your help. Yes, yours. And yours, too

By: Jeremy

Jeremy — Wed, 26 Sep 2012 17:26:21 +0000

Thanks, guys!

This feedback is very helpful.

I was thinking about taking the extra arms out to avoid a spider arm look.

All in all, I’m thinking that the image’s original purpose may get backburned and that we’ll need to go another route as we’re on a deadline.

But if anyone else jumps in with comments, they’ll be used for when we do release the image again on our pro site.

By: luisv91

luisv91 — Wed, 26 Sep 2012 17:13:59 +0000

I think it’s awesome. I also agree with Jude, more blur on Bill’s hands so it conveys a bit more motion.

By: Jude

Jude — Wed, 26 Sep 2012 17:05:39 +0000

I’d say the guy’s arms should be blurrier to convey movement.

By: zqtx

zqtx — Wed, 26 Sep 2012 16:31:36 +0000

Interesting image, Jeremy

I wish the overall decor of the kitchen were lighter to make all the subjects wearing dark clothes pop.

I like the idea of capturing movement, but the chef has 3 right arms and only 2 left arms. His expression should really be towards the food and not like he’s trying to slice a rogue fly around his head.
I like the food flying above the cutting board, but it looks like a patten on his shirt rather than in motion.

The shadow under you on the pizza cutter are a bit inconsistent. You may be able to get away with it with a faster dissolve of the wheel’s shadow on the right. All in all, it’s hard to think of the light source from that angle.

I like the girl stuck in the microwave, but it took me a while to notice her.

Hope it helps!